User contributions for Stephen Hui

9 June 2024

• 01:3101:31, 9 June 2024 diff hist −4‎ Gabriel & Dresden ‎ →‎Rise to fame (2003–2008): Removed Tracking Treasure Down wikilink that just redirected back to this article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 June 2024

• 01:0601:06, 5 June 2024 diff hist −54‎ Juncos Hollinger Racing ‎ →‎Ricardo Juncos: Deleted subjective, uncited "who grew up with a deep passion and desire for racing" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 00:5200:52, 5 June 2024 diff hist −9‎ Agustín Canapino ‎ →‎Personal life: "renowned race car mechanic" --> "race car mechanic" per MOS:PUFFERY: "Words to watch: renowned. Words such as these are often used without attribution to promote the subject of an article, while neither imparting nor plainly summarizing verifiable information" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

1 June 2024

• 18:4618:46, 1 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Steelcase ‎ →‎COVID-19 response: “COVID-19 Response” —> “COVID-19 response” per MOS:HEAD: “Section headings should […] be presented in sentence case not title case” current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

27 May 2024

• 01:5101:51, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Warren Hue ‎ Grammar/typo fix: "a student as British School Jakarta" --> "a student at British School Jakarta" current
• 01:4901:49, 27 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ m Typhoon Cobra ‎ Alphabetized a list which was previously ordered by (I think) whether lost or damaged, then combat power (assessed subjective/semi-arbitrarily, with CVEs being before the BB), then by pennant number; to a reader not possessing this information, the list order appeared arbitrary
• 01:3801:38, 27 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Typhoon Cobra ‎ Rephrased an awkward sentence: "led to the establishment of weather infrastructure of the U.S. Navy" --> "prompted the U.S. Navy to establish weather monitoring infrastructure"
• 01:3201:32, 27 May 2024 diff hist +8‎ Typhoon Cobra ‎ →‎Ships lost or damaged: Renamed "Ships damaged" section to "Ships lost or damaged" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

26 May 2024

• 19:0319:03, 26 May 2024 diff hist −10‎ m Naval Base Ulithi ‎ Various minor capitalization and grammar fixes to image captions
• 18:3718:37, 26 May 2024 diff hist −20‎ m Naval Base Ulithi ‎ Reworded an awkward sentence ("The court was held to see if any action were to be done" --> "to determine if Halsey should be sanctioned")
• 18:3018:30, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Naval Base Ulithi ‎ →‎Fleet support: Section heading "Fleet Support" --> "Fleet support" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:3601:36, 26 May 2024 diff hist −7‎ Public housing ‎ Reverted good faith edit by Nsae Comp because a) the phrase "housing government authority", while not technically incorrect, is very unusual word ordering, with Google only finding a page's worth of search results for the term while "government housing authority" is much more commonly used, and b) wikilinking "housing" is unnecessary per MOS:OVERLINK ("what generally should not be linked [...] everyday words understood by most readers in context")
• 01:1801:18, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ The Last Stand of the Tin Can Sailors ‎ →‎Graphic novel: Section heading "Graphic Novel" --> "Graphic novel" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 00:3700:37, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Danielle Smith ‎ →‎UCP leadership race: Improper noun "Leadership" --> "leadership" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

21 May 2024

• 06:3706:37, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Johnny Marr ‎ "the The" --> "The The" Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:3606:36, 21 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ Modest Mouse ‎ →‎Formation and early years: 1992–1999: "a.k.a." --> {{a.k.a.}} current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:0206:02, 21 May 2024 diff hist −295‎ Conscientious objector ‎ Removed statement in opening sentence that "conscientious objector" is "often shortened to 'conchie'"; the cited reference was from 1917, the Cambridge Dictionary says the term is "old-fashioned", the OED says it's "chiefly historical", and Collins says the word is "used rarely" current
• 05:5305:53, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Public housing ‎ Improper noun "Housing authority" --> "housing authority"
• 05:5205:52, 21 May 2024 diff hist −11‎ m George R. R. Martin ‎ "chess bubble burst" --> "chess craze subsided" per MOS:IDIOM: "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording"
• 05:3705:37, 21 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ m The Winds of Winter ‎ Removed slashes from infobox per MOS:SLASH: "Generally, avoid joining two words with a slash [...] Replace with clearer wording."
• 04:5604:56, 21 May 2024 diff hist +15‎ Paul Brandt ‎ →‎Early life: Copy edit to avoid repetition of "Alberta" twice in seven words current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:5104:51, 21 May 2024 diff hist +3‎ Paul Brandt ‎ "RN" --> "nurse" as many may not be familiar with the initialism Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

20 May 2024

• 02:3002:30, 20 May 2024 diff hist −23‎ Giraffe weevil ‎ Removed 19-year-old template designating the article as a stub; the template was applied when the article was one sentence long, but it's reasonably comprehensive now Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:2102:21, 20 May 2024 diff hist −12‎ Giraffe weevil ‎ →‎Predators: Rephrased an awkward sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:1602:16, 20 May 2024 diff hist −16‎ Giraffe weevil ‎ Copy edit to remove redundant text from the first two sentences Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:0702:07, 20 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ History of Chile ‎ "President" --> "president" per per MOS:JOBTITLE: "positions such as president [...] are common nouns and therefore should be in lower case when used generically" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:5201:52, 20 May 2024 diff hist −9‎ Ascidiacea ‎ →‎Culinary: Changed spelling of "Geoje Island" to match the spelling used in the Wikipedia article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:4701:47, 20 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Tunicate ‎ Deleted unnecessary single quotation marks Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

19 May 2024

• 06:4706:47, 19 May 2024 diff hist +28‎ Warren Hue ‎ Flagged as needing a copy edit -- there are grammar errors, randomly capitalized words, references to Hue by his first name, table formatting issues, and at least one orphaned/nonsensical sentence fragment Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:3806:38, 19 May 2024 diff hist −140‎ Lyn Lapid ‎ →‎Career: Rephrased two sentences copied almost verbatim from the cited Rolling Stone article per WP:PARAPHRASE and MOS:IDIOM Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 00:5900:59, 19 May 2024 diff hist −401‎ Cuisine of the Pennsylvania Dutch ‎ Removed unattributed quote that just restated the first and last sentences of the section anyway current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

18 May 2024

• 17:1517:15, 18 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ Douglas A-4 Skyhawk ‎ Removed period from a caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

17 May 2024

• 22:2822:28, 17 May 2024 diff hist −6‎ m Japanese battleship Hiei ‎ Rephrased a sentence to remove odd, informal phrasing "torpedoes courtesy of USS Sealion"

16 May 2024

• 07:0707:07, 16 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Alaska-class cruiser ‎ Added a comma in the middle of a long sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

15 May 2024

• 22:3722:37, 15 May 2024 diff hist −18‎ Carroll Baker ‎ Removed subjective and informal descriptor "potboiler" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

14 May 2024

• 00:5100:51, 14 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Photochemistry ‎ →‎Learned societies: Improper noun “Learned Societies” —> “Learned societies” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

11 May 2024

• 22:3422:34, 11 May 2024 diff hist +16‎ Stephen K. Benjamin ‎ Split a wikilink into two current
• 22:3122:31, 11 May 2024 diff hist +450‎ Wikipedia:Requested moves/Technical requests ‎ Change Office of Public Liaison back to its former (and now current) name White House Office of Public Engagement

10 May 2024

• 03:4903:49, 10 May 2024 diff hist +8‎ Cas Anvar ‎ Copy edit; no content changes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 May 2024

• 07:3807:38, 5 May 2024 diff hist −11‎ Serama ‎ →‎History: Rephrased a sentence to remove the statement "the breed was hit hard" per MOS:IDIOM: "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:1001:10, 5 May 2024 diff hist −4‎ Airbus A380 ‎ →‎Passenger provisions: "The Air Austral's" --> "Air Austral's" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

4 May 2024

• 19:0919:09, 4 May 2024 diff hist +3‎ Japanese battleship Hiei ‎ "Hiei was crippled shell hits" --> "Hiei was crippled by shell hits" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:5402:54, 4 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ BioViva ‎ British spelling "ageing" --> American spelling "aging" since this is an article about an American company Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

2 May 2024

• 06:5406:54, 2 May 2024 diff hist +7‎ INS Vikramaditya ‎ Commented out purchase price information which, upon further research, I believe to be inaccurately summarized; I'll come back to fix this later if no one beats me to it Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:3606:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ INS Vikrant (2013) ‎ →‎Repeat order: Section heading "Repeat Order" --> "Repeat order" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:3406:34, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Indian Navy ‎ →‎Later revival: Section heading "Later Revival" --> "Later revival" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:3206:32, 2 May 2024 diff hist −25‎ INS Vikramaditya ‎ Grammar fixes; no content changes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:2404:24, 2 May 2024 diff hist −4‎ Chinese aircraft carrier Liaoning ‎ →‎Modernization and refurbishment: Grammar: "In 2011 an analyst has spotted" --> "In 2011 an analyst spotted" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 03:3603:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ Fool's Gold Loaf ‎ →‎Preparation: Increased precision of a unit conversion current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 03:3203:32, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ Fool's Gold Loaf ‎ Increased number of significant digits in a unit conversion, as one pound is 454 grams, not 450 Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit