User contributions for JoeMarfice
A user with 432 edits. Account created on 5 October 2005.
16 February 2024
- 17:4017:40, 16 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Uncut Gems →Plot: Capitalized "The" as part of singer's name. Tag: Reverted
6 February 2024
- 16:5316:53, 6 February 2024 diff hist −4 m Yandex →Open source: Revised ungrammatical sentence.
- 16:5116:51, 6 February 2024 diff hist −4 m Yandex →Finances: Restructured ungrammatical sentence.
16 January 2024
- 13:3713:37, 16 January 2024 diff hist +52 Isabella of France →Fall of Gaveston: 1308–1312: Ridiculous claims require framing. Tag: Reverted
- 13:3113:31, 16 January 2024 diff hist −13 m Isabella of France →Queenship: Grammatical edit. Tag: Reverted
22 September 2023
- 13:3213:32, 22 September 2023 diff hist +59 Lance Bass →NSYNC: Explained who Pearlman was. Added first name.
7 September 2023
- 22:1522:15, 7 September 2023 diff hist +118 William R. Prom →In memory: Added another memorial. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
21 August 2023
- 14:4414:44, 21 August 2023 diff hist −3 YaCy →Distribution: Reduced overly broad claim that it can be installed on "any" OS.
- 14:2014:20, 21 August 2023 diff hist 0 m Internet censorship circumvention →Proxying: Capitallization
8 July 2023
- 21:5321:53, 8 July 2023 diff hist 0 m Wilfred Dunderdale →Life: Spelling correction
5 June 2023
- 17:4417:44, 5 June 2023 diff hist −3 m Deep ecology →Deepness: removed extraneous word "in"
17 April 2023
- 22:5922:59, 17 April 2023 diff hist −2 m List of Gilmore Girls characters →Sookie St. James: spacing
24 January 2023
- 17:5417:54, 24 January 2023 diff hist +2 m List of requirements engineering tools →RE tool list: punctuation
22 August 2022
- 14:4314:43, 22 August 2022 diff hist −306 List of requirements engineering tools →RE tool list: Sentence and reference have no context.
5 July 2022
- 02:1702:17, 5 July 2022 diff hist −5 m Synapsida →Patagia: "Both" used for 4, not 2, possible identities.
25 June 2022
- 19:3519:35, 25 June 2022 diff hist −4 Evolution of the eye →Focusing mechanism: F-number, not focal length, is affected by aperture size.
- 19:0619:06, 25 June 2022 diff hist 0 Evolution of the eye →Rate of evolution: Eyes could develop from primitive states. Would implies they always will evolve in every lineage.
19 January 2022
- 17:5517:55, 19 January 2022 diff hist +20 Birds of Prey (soundtrack) →Singles: Added wiki ref for Halsey.
- 17:5317:53, 19 January 2022 diff hist +4 Birds of Prey (soundtrack) →Singles: Added wiki ref for Ella Jay Basco.
14 October 2021
- 20:2720:27, 14 October 2021 diff hist −10 MAVLink →MAVLink Ecosystem: Updated broken link.
24 September 2021
- 18:3418:34, 24 September 2021 diff hist +1 m Diffraction-limited system →Extending numerical aperture: Corrected noun number
25 August 2021
- 15:3115:31, 25 August 2021 diff hist +230 Hazard analysis →Hazards and risk: Dated when standard was released.
- 15:1915:19, 25 August 2021 diff hist 0 Hazard analysis →Hazards and risk: DO-178B has been replaced by DO-178C.
1 July 2021
- 15:2915:29, 1 July 2021 diff hist +13 Standard Generalized Markup Language Previous version was a sentence fragment with no verb following "rigorously defined objects like programs and databases." Not sure if this is what is intended.
26 August 2020
- 05:2405:24, 26 August 2020 diff hist −324 Flamen →Marriage: Tried to improve English, as previous was apparently written by a non-native speaker. Chopped a couple incomprehensible sentences.
9 August 2020
- 03:1803:18, 9 August 2020 diff hist −61 Kate McKinnon →Saturday Night Live: Cleaned up language after last post.
- 03:1703:17, 9 August 2020 diff hist −75 Kate McKinnon →Saturday Night Live: Removed redundant information.
19 June 2020
- 20:4020:40, 19 June 2020 diff hist −18 List of file copying software →Review: "by both reviewers" - but link only indicated one reviewer.
- 20:3920:39, 19 June 2020 diff hist +404 List of file copying software →Review: Updated link date and added new reference.
10 June 2020
- 22:2922:29, 10 June 2020 diff hist +2 Lindsay Farris Epithet needs quotes, as it is not a common phrase, nor is it literal.
8 June 2020
- 22:0422:04, 8 June 2020 diff hist −1,495 KVM switch →How to select a right KVM switch solution for your own setup: This whole section has poor grammar, recommends specific product purchases, and uses incorrect terminology. Section should be deleted.
1 June 2020
- 12:5112:51, 1 June 2020 diff hist +1 m Corojo →Origin: Grammar
20 March 2020
- 03:5903:59, 20 March 2020 diff hist 0 m Daspletosaurus →Discovery and naming: Typo in species name 'torosus'.
3 March 2020
- 19:2919:29, 3 March 2020 diff hist +15 Conestoga wagon →Conestoga draft horse: Clarified he did not free slaves until he had no use for them. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
5 December 2019
- 01:4401:44, 5 December 2019 diff hist +2 Quake (natural phenomenon) →Moonquake: Previous claim of "no attenuation" would lead to endless vibration. Moon simply has fdeer than Earth. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
30 May 2019
- 01:4501:45, 30 May 2019 diff hist +420 Mark Menezes Updated with news item, reported internationally.
30 April 2019
- 22:2222:22, 30 April 2019 diff hist −135 Wolf Devil Woman →Plot: Removed oddly formatted opinion. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2022:20, 30 April 2019 diff hist +2 Wolf Devil Woman →Plot: Fixed capitalization, spelling and grammar. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:2117:21, 30 April 2019 diff hist −15 Yoarashi Okinu →Fictional story: Removed her name, ungrammatical in sentence.
11 April 2019
- 16:4916:49, 11 April 2019 diff hist −725 Wormhole →Schwarzschild wormholes: Removed paragraph beginning "An artist's impression", as figure is apparently missing.
26 March 2019
- 13:1613:16, 26 March 2019 diff hist −7 m Carny →Usage in popular culture: Formatting cleanup
- 12:5612:56, 26 March 2019 diff hist −5 m Carny →Usage in popular culture: Mruphy's Law: I made an editing mistake while criticizing someone else.
- 12:5512:55, 26 March 2019 diff hist −66 Carny →Usage in popular culture: Reversed vandalism by fan with poor editing skills.
3 January 2019
- 16:2916:29, 3 January 2019 diff hist −24 Lon Po Po →Description: Simplified wording.
15 November 2018
- 20:2120:21, 15 November 2018 diff hist −4 Signal passed at danger →Automatic train protection: ATP stops before danger, not beyond the start of danger.
6 November 2018
- 17:5017:50, 6 November 2018 diff hist −15 DEFCON →Yom Kippur War: Removed superfluous wording.
22 October 2018
- 14:5114:51, 22 October 2018 diff hist −10 m Balise →History: Grammar & spelling
15 October 2018
- 19:4219:42, 15 October 2018 diff hist 0 Ambrose →Attitude towards Jews: This sentence was blatantly anti-Semitic. Persecution of the Jewry is not "preventing favoritism".
10 October 2018
- 16:2516:25, 10 October 2018 diff hist −104 Commonwealth of Independent States →Human rights: Removed irrelevant reference to Turkmenistan.
12 August 2018
- 16:5716:57, 12 August 2018 diff hist +6 Number →Zero {{anchor|History of zero}}: Changed poor syntactical use of "etc".
