User contributions for JGlennny
A user with 32 edits. Account created on 2 May 2024.
29 May 2024
- 15:3415:34, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1,261 Talk:James H. Evans →Conflict of interest May 2024: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 11:3011:30, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1,524 Talk:James H. Evans →Conflict of interest May 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
28 May 2024
- 09:1409:14, 28 May 2024 diff hist +817 Talk:James H. Evans →Conflict of interest May 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
15 May 2024
- 11:2211:22, 15 May 2024 diff hist +346 Talk:James H. Evans →Conflict of interest May 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
14 May 2024
- 12:2812:28, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1,490 Talk:James H. Evans →Conflict of interest May 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
13 May 2024
- 16:2316:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist −67 Ryan Farish Copy edit first two paragraphs to create encyclopedia-style tone. Deletion of reference to film Despicable Me 2. The Wikipedia article on that film does not list Ryan Farish as part of the sound track team. This needs an IMDB reference to be included--it's a big Hollywood movie and Pharrell Williams did the track, according to the article. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
12 May 2024
- 09:2609:26, 12 May 2024 diff hist +3 Sister Cities International Revised first paragraph to more encyclopedic tone. Changed first sentence of Background subsection, added word "often"; Changed sub-head of "History" to "Notable Relationships" because this section does not talk about history, just about two notable relationships. Added link for NGO. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
8 May 2024
- 22:0222:02, 8 May 2024 diff hist +86 Modernism Copy edit on the first sentence of the Overview and definition sub-section. This article keeps coming up in my newcomer queue, and I keep chipping away at it. But the goal, as stated in the top "need to edit" prompt is unrealistic, in my opinion. Someone who knows a ton more than I do about "Modernism" wrote this article to begin with, and with a point of view. It's still an active influence on the present. Making it encyclopedic in tone is a gargantuan lift. Just saying. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:5221:52, 8 May 2024 diff hist −160 L'Epée Clocks Copy Edit throughout to reduce promotional tone. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 21:4521:45, 8 May 2024 diff hist 0 Ruben Maria Soriquez Copy editing on body text. Tried to reduce the obvious self-promotional tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
6 May 2024
- 15:2215:22, 6 May 2024 diff hist +27 Modernism Linked to Wikipedia pages for William Empson and his book Seven Types of Ambiguity. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 15:1815:18, 6 May 2024 diff hist +428 Modernism Added a sentence regarding William Empson's book 7 Types of Ambiguity to the Semiotics section. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
5 May 2024
- 20:1220:12, 5 May 2024 diff hist −673 Nick Pride and the Pimptones General copy editing for tone and puffery reduction throughout article. The article is still woefully under-referenced. I did not work on that. Hopefully some enthusiasts can find some sources for this and add them. I will give them a listen on Spotify! Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 19:4419:44, 5 May 2024 diff hist +113 User talk:JGlennny →Welcome!: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 19:2019:20, 5 May 2024 diff hist +1,089 User talk:JGlennny →Welcome!: Reply Tag: Reply
- 19:1019:10, 5 May 2024 diff hist +4,888 Juliane Bogner-Strauß Added three paragraphs to the Politics subheading, copied from the German Wikipedia page. This brings her political history up to date. Used links and references from the .de Wikipedia page. Tags: use of deprecated (unreliable) source Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 18:3818:38, 5 May 2024 diff hist +950 User talk:JGlennny Reply Tag: Reply
- 18:2918:29, 5 May 2024 diff hist −1,795 Kalani Oceanside Retreat I tried to diminish the promotional style of this article by comprehensive copy editing, for example altering the beginning of paragraphs so they all do not begin with the name of the place, and deleting a huge real estate listing quotation at the end of the article. I still consider this a highly suspect article from the standpoint of still being possibly too promotional. The claim to operate as an official US non-profit is not sufficiently substantiated in the text. More work needed. Tags: references removed Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
4 May 2024
- 07:3707:37, 4 May 2024 diff hist +16 Modernism Added link to Wikipedia article on World War 1. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 07:3507:35, 4 May 2024 diff hist +269 Modernism Pointed out the role of WW1 in the development of Modernism in the first paragraph. Previously it just said "war," but although there were other wars during the time Modernism developed, WW1 had the most, and most lasting, influence. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 06:2706:27, 4 May 2024 diff hist +384 User talk:JGlennny Reply Tag: Reply
3 May 2024
- 19:4919:49, 3 May 2024 diff hist +168 m Commodification of the womb Clarified first sentence of article. Added sentence regarding in vitro fertilization and embryo and egg freezing to end of first paragraph. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 19:4119:41, 3 May 2024 diff hist +573 m Abortion debate Added paragraph and reference at the end of judicial involvement section related to interstate travel of pregnant women for abortion. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 19:3419:34, 3 May 2024 diff hist +221 m List of male detective characters Added Detective Joe Miller, from The Expanse novels and TV series. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 19:2719:27, 3 May 2024 diff hist +330 m Erich Vermehren Added NY Times article reference to first line of Wikipedia article. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
- 19:2519:25, 3 May 2024 diff hist +196 m Tom Swift and His Submarine Boat Added author name to initial paragraph and added citation to show that this was a pseudonym for a team of writers. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
- 19:1919:19, 3 May 2024 diff hist +215 m Limbo (Coleridge poem) Added reference from poetry website that summarizes Coleridge as a poet. Tags: reference list removal Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: references
- 19:1119:11, 3 May 2024 diff hist −1,350 m Endless (comics) Full copy editing up to the section header "The Endless." Changes for tone as requested by the prompt for editing. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:5418:54, 3 May 2024 diff hist −125 m Reginald Campbell Copy editing for spelling, punctuation, usage, and grammar; content editing for consistency and appropriate tone/voice and logical exposition. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:3918:39, 3 May 2024 diff hist −106 m George Elliott Clarke Mainly copy editing, spelling and punctuation corrections along with deletion of some of the most egregious puffery and unsubstantiated/subjective claims. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
