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04:1904:19, 16 May 2024 diff hist −27‎ Margarine ‎ I haven't heard 'marge' in Australia and don't think it'd fit in, and indeed the reference just says it's "British" (contrary evidence welcome). Australian and New Zealand English aren't exactly the same. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

07:3607:36, 25 January 2024 diff hist −1‎ Popular referendum ‎No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

06:1606:16, 20 September 2023 diff hist +12‎ Lojban grammar ‎ →‎gismu – core verbs Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:0014:00, 13 September 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Playdate (console) ‎ →‎Developers Tag: Visual edit

05:2605:26, 8 September 2023 diff hist −237‎ Finvenkism ‎ Tried again: removing duplicate paragraph Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
05:2205:22, 8 September 2023 diff hist +13‎ Finvenkism ‎ Removed near duplicate paragraph Tags: nowiki added Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10:3110:31, 6 September 2023 diff hist +3‎ Creation Engine ‎ Grammar, was weird to say "games such as.." when there is only one Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14:4814:48, 31 August 2023 diff hist +172‎ Jim Boyd (musician) ‎ NAMA reference Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
14:4714:47, 31 August 2023 diff hist +9‎ Jim Boyd (musician) ‎No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

15:4915:49, 30 August 2023 diff hist −286‎ Fight Club ‎ Already mentioned in a later paragraph, a bit more naturally. Undid revision 1172988658 by Bradychisman (talk): Identified as test/vandalism using m:WikiLoop DoubleCheck version 4.1.2. See it or provide your opinion at http://doublecheck.wikiloop.org/revision/enwiki/1172988658 Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:4315:43, 30 August 2023 diff hist −38‎ Róisín Murphy ‎ Undid revision 1172988012 by 135.180.133.152 (talk): Identified as test/vandalism using m:WikiLoop DoubleCheck version 4.1.2. See it or provide your opinion at http://doublecheck.wikiloop.org/revision/enwiki/1172988012 Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit

08:3308:33, 29 August 2023 diff hist −22‎ Michael Moore ‎ Undid revision 1172782891 by 2600:4040:9CDE:2B00:DB9:4090:657F:BC9 (talk): Identified as test/vandalism using m:WikiLoop DoubleCheck version 4.1.2. See it or provide your opinion at http://doublecheck.wikiloop.org/revision/enwiki/1172782891 Tag: Undo
08:2808:28, 29 August 2023 diff hist −20‎ Shai Bolton ‎ Undid revision 1172771523 by 110.145.206.70 (talk) Tag: Manual revert
08:2608:26, 29 August 2023 diff hist −10‎ Slave Trade Act of 1800 ‎ Undid revision 1172771580 by 86.98.4.27 (talk): Identified as test/vandalism using m:WikiLoop DoubleCheck version 4.1.2. See it or provide your opinion at http://doublecheck.wikiloop.org/revision/enwiki/1172771580 current Tag: Undo
06:1906:19, 29 August 2023 diff hist +2,007‎ Krovostok ‎ Undid revision 1172771643 by 2603:7000:2101:AA00:D09A:8A70:3959:5781 (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
06:1706:17, 29 August 2023 diff hist +652‎ Restricted shell ‎ Undid revision 1172770987 by 113.211.139.9 (talk) Tag: Undo
06:1106:11, 29 August 2023 diff hist +701‎ Emanuel Aiwu ‎ Undid revision 1172771141 by 2A02:C7C:ACE5:9700:6481:F6B1:6A00:D791 (talk): Identified as test/vandalism using m:WikiLoop DoubleCheck version 4.1.2. See it or provide your opinion at http://doublecheck.wikiloop.org/revision/enwiki/1172771141 Tag: Undo
06:1006:10, 29 August 2023 diff hist +3‎ French Football Federation ‎ Undid revision 1172771145 by 86.98.4.27 (talk): Identified as test/vandalism using m:WikiLoop DoubleCheck version 4.1.2. See it or provide your opinion at http://doublecheck.wikiloop.org/revision/enwiki/1172771145 Tag: Undo
04:5904:59, 29 August 2023 diff hist +57‎ 2023–24 V.League 1 ‎ Undid revision 1172764474 by 123.16.149.94 (talk) Seems like they're still on the team. Describe reason if I'm mistaken Tag: Undo

05:5105:51, 24 August 2023 diff hist +1,093‎ Talk:Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ →‎Style Improvements: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply

14:4414:44, 22 August 2023 diff hist −4‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ →‎Akatsuki: Windows port section for AA. English improvement. Also spaced out separate paragraphs here Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13:3513:35, 22 August 2023 diff hist −63‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ →‎Development: Improved flow of this sentence. The English here was a little weird. It is unclear both when 'last month' is, and what its 'climate' means. Additionally, the citation is another tweet saying "Backers have been sent emails", but there's no way to see that email's content. However, most of all, even if that content was available and explained the reason for the delay, I just don't think it's that important to state the reason here, when delays happen all the time. Tag: Reverted
13:2913:29, 22 August 2023 diff hist −2‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ It doesn't make any sense at all to say "People think 'Ausf. Achse' is a mispelling of 'Ausf. Achse'". The German phrase is 'auf Achse' Tag: Reverted
13:2213:22, 22 August 2023 diff hist −92‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ →‎Synopsis: This section was really clumsy, and should be a lot better now. I can't even get what this 'true leader' is from the text. The 'taking on' bit is also unnatural, because we haven't mentioned anyone doing it. Tag: Reverted
13:1913:19, 22 August 2023 diff hist +9‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ →‎Synopsis: (Please chat on the talk page before reverting~) This section was actually really unclear that the submarine was from 50 years in the past. I've tried to fix that by putting the points in order. The 'fall into enemy..' and 'on the other hand..' bits were really unnatural English. Finally, the last sentence was repetitive, and should now be a lot easier to read. Tag: Reverted
13:0413:04, 22 August 2023 diff hist −6‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ A 'plot hole' is a mistake in the storytelling. Tag: Reverted
13:0313:03, 22 August 2023 diff hist −155‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ The Synopsis section is describing the general plot of the series. There's no reason to mention Blitzkampf's relation to Shisei Ichigou as a product. Tag: Reverted
12:5012:50, 22 August 2023 diff hist −83‎ Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ I can't tell what the point of this sentence is here. Was the finalized version released because of this change in marketing? I don't think it's important. Additionally, because of the language, I can't actually tell if the market is up or down, and the citation is just a twitter post that says "We've sent an email to backers", but no content. Overall I don't think this info is important here, but if it is it isn't explained why. Tag: Reverted
12:3012:30, 22 August 2023 diff hist +575‎ Talk:Akatsuki Blitzkampf ‎ →‎Style Improvements: new section Tag: New topic

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