User contributions for 38.49.92.244

18 November 2023

• 18:4518:45, 18 November 2023 diff hist −6‎ Bilad al-Sham ‎ →‎Geography

13 October 2022

• 00:1100:11, 13 October 2022 diff hist +27‎ Trick-or-treating ‎ →‎Trunk-or-treat: "in recent years" is meaninglessly ambiguous per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 October 2022

• 10:1410:14, 12 October 2022 diff hist −19‎ Mike Rinder ‎ rmv "He has explained, " which apparently was left dangling in a previous edit Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 October 2022

• 07:5307:53, 10 October 2022 diff hist +77‎ Firebird (2021 film) ‎ →‎Reception: In order to achieve NPOV, at least one negative review should be quoted too, in order to sample what 45% of critics dislike about the movie
• 07:5107:51, 10 October 2022 diff hist −156‎ Talk:Firebird (2021 film) ‎ remove blatant vandalism
• 07:4707:47, 10 October 2022 diff hist +488‎ Talk:Firebird (2021 film) ‎ →‎Needs negative review examples: new section Tag: New topic

7 October 2022

• 10:4810:48, 7 October 2022 diff hist +27‎ Language interpretation ‎ "less than a century ago" is unnecessarily ambiguous and vague, per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:5603:56, 7 October 2022 diff hist −2‎ Fabien Frankel ‎ →‎Early life: correct euphemistic "Frankel lost his father" to "Frankel's father died" per MOS: EUPHEMISM Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

6 October 2022

• 16:2916:29, 6 October 2022 diff hist 0‎ Stark Sands ‎ →‎Career: "North American" S

5 October 2022

• 20:0520:05, 5 October 2022 diff hist +4‎ Tic-tac-toe ‎ →‎In popular culture: italicize movie title per MOS:ITALICTITLE
• 11:5811:58, 5 October 2022 diff hist −64‎ Shumway ‎ →‎Places: no red links (Shumway, California) on a dab page

4 October 2022

• 23:5023:50, 4 October 2022 diff hist +194‎ Austin City Limits ‎ →‎Theme song: restore my previous edit, mistakenly reverted for being unconstructive Tag: Manual revert
• 23:4123:41, 4 October 2022 diff hist +969‎ User talk:Nagol0929 ‎ →‎My edit to Austin City Limits: new section Tags: Reverted New topic
• 23:1323:13, 4 October 2022 diff hist −1‎ Blue Cross Blue Shield Association ‎ →‎Nonprofit status debate: typo
• 16:4516:45, 4 October 2022 diff hist +194‎ Austin City Limits ‎ →‎Theme song: unlink "Tequila Mockingbird": Tequila Mockingbird is a 1977 jazz album by Ramsey Lewis, obviously not what is meant here. Possibly should be https://tequilamockingbird.com/, a custom music and sound studio in Austin Tag: Reverted
• 02:5202:52, 4 October 2022 diff hist −5‎ Luke Jensen ‎ rmv second instance in intro of "Luke" per MOS:SURNAME
• 02:5002:50, 4 October 2022 diff hist −16‎ Murphy Jensen ‎ →‎Personal life: rmv euphemistic "struggles with" per MOS:EUPHEMISM
• 00:1200:12, 4 October 2022 diff hist +1‎ Adrian Lyne ‎ →‎Twenty year gap: plural subject requires plural verb

3 October 2022

• 15:2515:25, 3 October 2022 diff hist +6‎ Required minimum distribution ‎ boldface alternative title in intro per MOS:BOLD
• 10:5010:50, 3 October 2022 diff hist +4‎ Greta Gerwig ‎ →‎2006–2009: Early career: add missing subject "she"
• 10:4910:49, 3 October 2022 diff hist −6‎ Greta Gerwig ‎ →‎Early life: correct ambiguous "would make" to "made"

2 October 2022

• 21:3621:36, 2 October 2022 diff hist +4‎ Rich Mullins ‎ →‎Early life: link four-part harmony
• 15:1515:15, 2 October 2022 diff hist +40‎ Greensleeves ‎ →‎Form: This section is too technical for most readers to understand. Instead of sending readers to multiple links hoping to find the answers, technical terms should be defined briefly here.
• 06:1506:15, 2 October 2022 diff hist +2‎ King Arthur (opera) ‎ →‎Music: song title in quotes
• 06:0706:07, 2 October 2022 diff hist −2‎ King Arthur (opera) ‎ correct markup goof from preceding edit

1 October 2022

• 20:1620:16, 1 October 2022 diff hist −6‎ Robert Rauschenberg ‎ →‎Life and career: rmv boldface from full birth name, already appropriately bold in intro, per MOS:BOLD
• 19:5519:55, 1 October 2022 diff hist +24‎ Starting gate ‎ →‎Flat horse racing: correct "expect"—almost certainly a typo—to "except"; need ref for steeplechase exceptions
• 19:4619:46, 1 October 2022 diff hist −1‎ Starting gate ‎ →‎Flat horse racing: "claim" is biased, "say" is neutral, per MOS:SAY
• 19:4219:42, 1 October 2022 diff hist −3‎ Starting gate ‎ →‎Flat horse racing: rmv italics from quotation per MOS:NOITALQUOTE
• 19:2219:22, 1 October 2022 diff hist +42‎ Rotonda West, Florida ‎ link deed-restricted
• 19:1419:14, 1 October 2022 diff hist −1‎ Covenant (law) ‎ →‎History: correct spelling of "Colored"
• 19:1119:11, 1 October 2022 diff hist −2‎ Covenant (law) ‎ →‎United States: rmv quotation marks from blockquote per MOS:BQ
• 17:2917:29, 1 October 2022 diff hist +24‎ Aplastic anemia ‎ →‎top: need ref for Roosevelt cause of death Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 04:3004:30, 1 October 2022 diff hist −3‎ Grosse Pointe Blank ‎ →‎Reception: correct "more clever" to "cleverer" per standard cosmopolitan English dictionaries Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

30 September 2022

• 01:4101:41, 30 September 2022 diff hist −20‎ Todd Field ‎ →‎Early life: rmv peacockish "acclaimed" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

28 September 2022

• 07:2107:21, 28 September 2022 diff hist −3‎ Thymus ‎ correct "more clear" to "clearer" per standard cosmopolitan English dictionaries

27 September 2022

• 03:1603:16, 27 September 2022 diff hist −12‎ Claire Dederer ‎ rmv peacockish "well-known" per MOS:PEA

26 September 2022

• 19:0219:02, 26 September 2022 diff hist −43‎ King Arthur (opera) ‎ →‎top: rmv artist's name from infobox caption per MOS: CREDITS Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 18:5818:58, 26 September 2022 diff hist +1‎ King Arthur (opera) ‎ →‎top: in infobox caption, correct unnecessarily ambiguous "The composer" to "Henry Purcell" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 00:5100:51, 26 September 2022 diff hist 0‎ William Harrison ‎ →‎Other: In contexts like this, US state names are used attributively rather than adjectivized: "Texas soldier", not "Texan soldier"

25 September 2022

• 08:2808:28, 25 September 2022 diff hist −6‎ Cinnabar ‎ →‎Properties and structure: rmv presumptuous and instructional "Note, " per MOS:NOTE Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

24 September 2022

• 04:5704:57, 24 September 2022 diff hist +34‎ Binomial series ‎ this article is far too technical for most readers to understand

23 September 2022

• 00:0100:01, 23 September 2022 diff hist −8‎ Sukiyaki ‎ rmv italics from "mirin" per MOS:FOREIGNITALIC ("do not italicize words that appear unitalicized in multiple major English dictionaries")

22 September 2022

• 08:3308:33, 22 September 2022 diff hist +12‎ Port wine ‎ →‎top: replace commas with spaced en dashes for clarity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 07:4807:48, 22 September 2022 diff hist +5‎ Lion Gate ‎ →‎Construction: rmv presumptuous and instructional "note ..." from caption per MOS:NOTE Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 07:4407:44, 22 September 2022 diff hist +4‎ Lion Gate ‎ →‎Entrance: link enceinte; NOTE: preceding edit rmvd "what was", which implied that the ruins of Mycenae no longer exist (I accidentally double-tapped PUBLISH) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 07:3307:33, 22 September 2022 diff hist −9‎ Lion Gate ‎ →‎top Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

21 September 2022

• 22:2322:23, 21 September 2022 diff hist +6‎ Navy Pier ‎ rmv incompatible "nearly" from "over nine million visitors", which agrees with the ref; tag second ref as dead link
• 20:0320:03, 21 September 2022 diff hist −65‎ Grand Nain ‎ →‎Economic relevance: rmv unsupported "The seedless quality of the fruits also increases its popularity" because all Cavendish cultivars are seedless Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• 19:5619:56, 21 September 2022 diff hist −20‎ Grand Nain ‎ →‎Taxonomy: rmv "and/" from "or" per MOS:ANDOR; rmv "well known" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit